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It might be fun and interesting to do a variation on Rishi's "Une Lingne Donne" discussion in which three participants will each write a full haiku (rather than a single line) that will end up telling a cohesive haiku "story."

The first person will write a haiku. The second person will hit "reply" to that haiku, copy and paste it in the reply box, then add his or her own haiku. The third person will hit "reply" to the second  offering, copy and paste the first two haiku, then add the third and final haiku.

Three haiku for each completed "story" sounds good to me because it gives the opportunity for a beginning, middle, and end.

I'll begin...

Tags: collaboration, poetry

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singing in the rain

we're just singing in the rain

tipping on tip toes

 

with dampened spirits

we rise above the chaos

enjoy each other

OR ....

 

singing in the rain

we're just singing in the rain

tipping on tip toes

 

just singing in rain

what a glorious feeling

I'm happy again

 

singing in the rain

we're just singing in the rain

tipping on tip toes

 

just singing in rain

what a glorious feeling

I'm happy again

 

hold on while it lasts

treasure each moment of joy

the flood is coming

 

singing in the rain

we're just singing in the rain

tipping on tip toes

 

with dampened spirits

we rise above the chaos

enjoy each other

 

while sun-filled raindrops

illuminate dim corners

of our care worn hearts

eyes looking inward

memories like old photos

aging in attics

eyes looking inward

memories like old photos

aging in attics

 

a heart cache of love

painful retrieval at first

comforting later

 

eyes looking inward

memories like old photos

aging in attics

 

a heart cache of love

painful retrieval at first

comforting later

for beneath the pain

yesterday's forgotten joy

waits to spring anew 

pylons of color

orange tipped with white and yellow

halloween begins

 

autumn winds strengthen

squirrels excavate their nuts

munchkins make disguise

pylons of color

orange tipped with white and yellow

halloween begins

 

autumn winds strengthen

squirrels excavate their nuts

munchkins make disguise

 

Seeking many things

a hidden identity

and mostly candy!

Halloween evening

some dressed, some wait 'til Thursday

where'd that snow come from....

 

 

Halloween evening
some dressed, some wait 'til Thursday
where'd that snow come from....

turkey comes and goes
thanks for blessings is given
some look for a star...

dawn breaks on a manger
some celebrate a child's birth
a new year begins...

life's joy returning

broken heart resurrected

all because of you

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