TBD on Ning

Thoughts from He to She

You are attracted to the shy one
Do not tell me that M'dear
You are unique with star-like fun
Showing curiosity with no fear

Your sweet childlike purity
No way trying to be coy
That is a rare obscurity
Instead of the cunning ploy

Sadly all the women I am knowing
Keep what they feel under covers
You with wind blasted hair blowing
Have many unknown following lovers

Lady I feel you under value the worth
You have in and around your presence
At the very early hour of your birth
You emit a feeling of extreme pleasance

I find your vivid color of life compositions
To be more to me than just entertaining
Not even overtaken by cunning magicians
You unknowingly encourage our sustaining

Strength to carry on throughout the day
Our long unpleasant daily tasks at hand
Until we hear your sweet voice say
Today we will laugh as it is my command

©Julia A Knaake

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A very beautiful poem.

Thank you for posting.

The first time I left TBD

there were few people here

I came back again but it

seems like I am only talking to myself

I like me so  I stay here 


still true




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