Vacation's over and I need the rest.
That was pretty short and sweet but to the point.
Oh my goodness, my goodness, I just LOVED your story Luvy
I read your story then I read it again out loud and
I heard those people snickering at Pa
wearing that pretty flower hat
then I saw the great lesson he gave to his son...bravo for a wonderful story
You guys are good :0)
very amusing Luvy!!!
For years and years
we saved our cash
to travel far across this land
then off we went
to have some fun
with our small child close at hand
at the station
we now arrived
with all our luggage packed so tight
but we arrived
one day too soon
so on this bench we spent the night
Probably not what you were expecting but I can't write stories that are not poems :-)
That's great lol ... :0)
I liked your poem very much , it was very good and to the point...and it was too writing
poems, stories even a chapter of a story , anything to share is great
when I look at a photo I pretty much always come up with a story or poem
Thank you for the compliment. I do think Luvy takes the prize though. I could actually visualize everything she wrote in great detail as I was reading it.
yes I think you are right about Luvy taking the prize
you certainly could visualize the family in detail
and I felt like I was right there seeing everything going on