TBD on Ning

"Une lingne donne" the first line given!

It is the first line in a poem that becomes the inspiration for all the other lines in the poem.

here goes:

unknown to my heart

Permalink Reply by d's girl on July 7, 2011 at 5:07pm

he opens the box

smiles as memories flood him

Permalink Reply by metub4 on July 7, 2011 at 7:14pm

he opens the box

smiles as memories flood him

while a tear breaks free

Permalink Reply by d's girl on July 8, 2011 at 1:20pm

hydrant sprays an arch

Permalink Reply by metub4 on July 8, 2011 at 6:54pm

hydrant sprays an arch

frisky kids dart in and out

Permalink Reply by d's girl on July 9, 2011 at 3:57am

hydrant sprays an arch

frisky kids dart in and out

hot city's delight

Permalink Reply by metub4 on July 9, 2011 at 5:43am

butterscotch candy

Permalink Reply by Angharad on July 9, 2011 at 2:09pm

butterscotch candy

sunbleached color of his hair

Permalink Reply by Angharad on July 9, 2011 at 2:10pm

butterscotch candy

sunbleached color of his hair

eyes blue as cornflowers

I cheated...lol

Permalink Reply by Angharad on July 9, 2011 at 2:14pm

I'll do another candy reference, metub4...

saltwater taffy

Permalink Reply by metub4 on July 9, 2011 at 5:35pm

saltwater taffy

the kind grandma used to like

Permalink Reply by metub4 on July 10, 2011 at 12:11am

saltwater taffy

the kind we stretched 'tween our thighs

Permalink Reply by Angharad on July 13, 2011 at 6:35am

saltwater taffy

the kind we stretched 'tween our thighs

sweet and silky treat

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