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TBD on Ning

It might be fun and interesting to do a variation on Rishi's "Une Lingne Donne" discussion in which three participants will each write a full haiku (rather than a single line) that will end up telling a cohesive haiku "story."

The first person will write a haiku. The second person will hit "reply" to that haiku, copy and paste it in the reply box, then add his or her own haiku. The third person will hit "reply" to the second  offering, copy and paste the first two haiku, then add the third and final haiku.

Three haiku for each completed "story" sounds good to me because it gives the opportunity for a beginning, middle, and end.

I'll begin...

Tags: collaboration, poetry

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I LUB YOUR MIND, TBDeez, d's girl, FGT, Fanny Quackenbush, whatever the heck your name is...

You make me smile.

Whatever moniker you finally light on, if any, let's have a money shot for your avatar. Uh oh...is that innappropriate??   Hahahaha.

hahaha.... I'm sorry I missed all the banter of the last several posts. 

Glad you liked the caterpillar-snail ride, Kooner. '-)

Angharad.... what can I say? I love you. ❧❤❧

 

btw.... the angst-ridden, emotional rollercoaster morphing has stopped for the moment & I've joyfully returned to being d's girl. Such a delightful twist on my formerly oh-so-ever-fiercely-independent self. I love it. Truly, I do. '-)

apologizing

he is buffeted by angst

hating to cause pain

apologizing

he is buffeted by angst

hating to cause pain

 

"life is pain," she says

repressed tears brim in his eyes...

he clenches his jaw

apologizing

he is buffeted by angst

hating to cause pain

 

"life is pain," she says

repressed tears brim in his eyes...

he clenches his jaw

 

what has passed is past

he grasps her hesitant hand

and asks for new chance

Your gentle soul always shines through, M.  Truth and making heartfelt, honest amends is almost always worth another chance, in my book.

Love you, Boy.  XOXOXOXOXOX

OH, so true, Kooner! XOXOXOXOXOX

the reality is.......

I love all my haiku friends

sharing pain and joy

the reality is.......
I love all my haiku friends
sharing pain and joy

Overt or subtle......
Male, female, friend, even foe
Hot, wet, though they go

 

their words resonate...
ten thousand beautiful birds
rising to heaven

reaching in the dark

for her transmigrated soul

he smells tea roses

reaching in the dark

for her transmigrated soul

he smells tea roses

 

transported he muses.....

she frolics before his eyes

it was all so good

reaching in the dark
for her transmigrated soul
he smells tea roses

transported he muses.....
she frolics before his eyes
it was all so good

and love never dies
she will be with him always...
her laughter echoes

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