TBD on Ning

Since my interest in the Haiku form arose out of my exploration of mindfulness, most of my efforts will somehow fall under that heading. So rather than try to force-fit them into previously existing discussions, I will start my own. I make no pretense now, of understanding the nuances of the form other than the 5/7/5 requirement, so I guess they will mostly be "basterdizations". So be it, sometimes the message trumps the format. That being said, I promise to take the time to at least try to understand the rules that I may be breaking. I will start by collecting here the few that have been offered elsewhere.

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Coming and going,

Waterfowl, no traces, no plans.

Tao does as it is.

           ~  With a little help from Dogen Zenji

future in balance

humanity tracks in sand

change blows across us

Vigilant robin.

Focused fully on the hunt.

Bane of the wild worm.

red breasted robin

feasted on early morn worms

fruit for first in line

Slivers of silver

Moonlight slips through cloud cover.

Thus arrives wisdom.

Gorgeous, PTB!




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