TBD on Ning

Since my interest in the Haiku form arose out of my exploration of mindfulness, most of my efforts will somehow fall under that heading. So rather than try to force-fit them into previously existing discussions, I will start my own. I make no pretense now, of understanding the nuances of the form other than the 5/7/5 requirement, so I guess they will mostly be "basterdizations". So be it, sometimes the message trumps the format. That being said, I promise to take the time to at least try to understand the rules that I may be breaking. I will start by collecting here the few that have been offered elsewhere.

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Dawn creeping thru oaks

Cardinals courting their mates

Oh look a squirrel

Happiness alights

Mind debates there could be more

Farewell butterfly

Heavy with remorse

Anxious as to tomorrow

Alive in the Now

No time to smell rose

Miles to go before I win

But where is the Bliss

mindfulness present

new musings beckon wide eyes

what will unfold next ?

Breaking the rules is what we do here for the joy of expressing ourselves, PTB, so don't worry about them in this context.

THANK YOU for starting a new discussion. New discussions spark inspiration!

So glad you're here!

chaos thrums loudly--
my eyes close to see clearly
one perfect petal

Outlet mall with wife

Mindfulness don't let down

Eight shoe stores later

HAHAHAHA! You're a stalwart guy!!!

Future uncharted

Should tomorrow bring trouble

Why suffer today

vision of today :

blank canvas pining for hue

what color awaits us?

The lion may roar

To cover secret torment

Inspect paw for thorn

distracted driver
(drivers behind hurl curses) 
sick child beside him




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