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It is the first line in a poem that becomes the inspiration for all the other lines in the poem.

here goes:

unknown to my heart




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nice to hear from friends

nice to hear from friends

comfort in each word spoken

nice to hear from friends

comfort in each word spoken

fodder for our souls

sun breaks through grey clouds

sun breaks through grey clouds

long drawn faces start to beam

sun breaks through grey clouds

long drawn faces start to beam

anticipating

snow begins to fall

snow begins to fall

small footprints lead through pure white

snow begins to fall

small footprints lead through pure white

larger ones follow

I love this, M. It wasn't where my mind was going, and it gave me a wonderful warm feeling because I'm seeing it as a "pet" and his/her person walking in the quiet through the newly falling snow.

Of course, it could be a predator following a bunny...HAHAHAHA! Not quite so idyllic. :>)

Is it not strange how we can interpret various angles from just a few words........ I will admit a pet is not exactly what was originally thought and definitely not a wolf after peter cottontail and it presents a warm feeling on this end knowing one was produced on the readers end and we write on....................

shoots pushing skyward

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