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It might be fun and interesting to do a variation on Rishi's "Une Lingne Donne" discussion in which three participants will each write a full haiku (rather than a single line) that will end up telling a cohesive haiku "story."

The first person will write a haiku. The second person will hit "reply" to that haiku, copy and paste it in the reply box, then add his or her own haiku. The third person will hit "reply" to the second  offering, copy and paste the first two haiku, then add the third and final haiku.

Three haiku for each completed "story" sounds good to me because it gives the opportunity for a beginning, middle, and end.

I'll begin...

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between the pages

their life played in black on white

emotions in prose

 

subtle poetry

wrings love from sweet words, shared by

a few reaching souls...

between the pages

their life played in black on white

emotions in prose

 

subtle poetry

wrings love from sweet words, shared by

a few reaching souls...

 

words mark their passage

when the words are gone, there'll be

nothing left but love

 

 

 

 

 



pink cherry blossoms

floating to earth, rosy rain...

is one bloom perfect?

 

pink cherry blossoms

floating to earth, rosy rain...

is one bloom perfect?

 

compared to your face

there is nothing to equal

your radiance beams

 

pink cherry blossoms

floating to earth, rosy rain...

is one bloom perfect?

 

compared to your face

there is nothing to equal...

your radiance beams

 

perhaps like blossoms

all things have unique beauty

perfect, every one

 

Kisses.

 

darkness descended

flames guttered and flickered out

hope shone in his eyes

darkness descended

flames guttered and flickered out

hope shone in his eyes

 

"beyond dark endings

beginnings wait in sunlight..."

he whispered that truth

 

I love the way you rounded that out, Kooner!

angels surround him

he keeps faith in his fashion

seeking constantly

angels surround him

he keeps faith in his fashion

seeking constantly

 

why must pain exist?

he avoids inflicting it

which exacts a toll

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