Since my interest in the Haiku form arose out of my exploration of mindfulness, most of my efforts will somehow fall under that heading. So rather than try to force-fit them into previously existing discussions, I will start my own. I make no pretense now, of understanding the nuances of the form other than the 5/7/5 requirement, so I guess they will mostly be "basterdizations". So be it, sometimes the message trumps the format. That being said, I promise to take the time to at least try to understand the rules that I may be breaking. I will start by collecting here the few that have been offered elsewhere.
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Spot on
Knee jerk reaction
Or a moment's reflection
A measured response
High sun, puffy clouds
Plumbers, bills, petulant wife
Lost sight of precepts
heavy eyelids fall
cool blue light pulses gently
thoughts pass unheeded
Thrill of victory
Or agony of defeat
Holding it even
I believe in that balance.
elation or angst
equal opportunity
disruption of ch'i
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Fruitless to expect
Neighbor's grass to be greener
Welcoming life's gifts
What breadth in the small
An inch 'tween Heaven and Hell
Butterfly effect
Lost in ennui
Untouched by sensations.
Each day a small death
an emptiness gnaws
diving deep to find its source
i see where you aren't
Paying it forward
While I tend my own garden
Love blooms were its sown
What if I fall flat
Frozen by indecision
Blocked by what if
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