TBD on Ning
Mindfulness
Since my interest in the Haiku form arose out of my exploration of mindfulness, most of my efforts will somehow fall under that heading. So rather than try to force-fit them into previously existing discussions, I will start my own. I make no pretense now, of understanding the nuances of the form other than the 5/7/5 requirement, so I guess they will mostly be "basterdizations". So be it, sometimes the message trumps the format. That being said, I promise to take the time to at least try to understand the rules that I may be breaking. I will start by collecting here the few that have been offered elsewhere.
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Permalink Reply by PartTimeBrewer on
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Dawn creeping thru oaks
Cardinals courting their mates
Oh look a squirrel
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Happiness alights
Mind debates there could be more
Farewell butterfly
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Heavy with remorse
Anxious as to tomorrow
Alive in the Now
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No time to smell rose
Miles to go before I win
But where is the Bliss
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Permalink Reply by metub4 on
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mindfulness present
new musings beckon wide eyes
what will unfold next ?
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Permalink Reply by Angharad on
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Breaking the rules is what we do here for the joy of expressing ourselves, PTB, so don't worry about them in this context.
THANK YOU for starting a new discussion. New discussions spark inspiration!
So glad you're here!
chaos thrums loudly--
my eyes close to see clearly
one perfect petal -
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Outlet mall with wife
Mindfulness don't let down
Eight shoe stores later
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Future uncharted
Should tomorrow bring trouble
Why suffer today
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The lion may roar
To cover secret torment
Inspect paw for thorn
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