Since my interest in the Haiku form arose out of my exploration of mindfulness, most of my efforts will somehow fall under that heading. So rather than try to force-fit them into previously existing discussions, I will start my own. I make no pretense now, of understanding the nuances of the form other than the 5/7/5 requirement, so I guess they will mostly be "basterdizations". So be it, sometimes the message trumps the format. That being said, I promise to take the time to at least try to understand the rules that I may be breaking. I will start by collecting here the few that have been offered elsewhere.
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founding fathers prize
the pursuit of happiness
best let it seek you
Too much to confront
The labor of a lifetime
Needs done day by day
Replayed misfortune
Round and round karma's wheel turns
Lessons need learning
Reminds me of the Loggins song:
make a real change now
waiting for a miracle
closes the circle
Snowfall fills the sky
Disappears into the sea
Drink in the silence
the words of last year
spoken in the old language
next year a new voice
with a little help from T. S. Eliot
words shared from last year :
some will remain forever
others best be lost
we pray for new voice
we need a new tone, approach
leading us forward
sky of azure blue
V line of geese overhead
One moment in time
dead leaves in brown grass
a splash of yellow peaks through
foolish winter bloom
howling brisk north winds
blowing leaves aimlessly sow
harbinger of spring
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