First Haiku - TBD2024-03-28T23:36:03Zhttps://teebeedee.ning.com/forum/topics/first-haiku?groupUrl=haikusenryu&commentId=1991841%3AComment%3A924159&x=1&feed=yes&xn_auth=noI love that, Quilty! Thank yo…tag:teebeedee.ning.com,2010-04-13:1991841:Comment:9241592010-04-13T19:20:26.971Zd's girlhttps://teebeedee.ning.com/profile/Taylor565
I love that, Quilty! Thank you for sharing it w/us!
I love that, Quilty! Thank you for sharing it w/us! This was a 6th grade English…tag:teebeedee.ning.com,2010-04-13:1991841:Comment:9229932010-04-13T03:51:08.371ZQuiltyhttps://teebeedee.ning.com/profile/Quilty
This was a 6th grade English assignment -- and the beginning of my obsession with the challenge of "painting the whole picture" in just 17 syllables.<br />
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"First Snow"<br />
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Warm coat, warm pockets<br />
Fingers explore the corners --<br />
Something! (Memories...)
This was a 6th grade English assignment -- and the beginning of my obsession with the challenge of "painting the whole picture" in just 17 syllables.<br />
<br />
"First Snow"<br />
<br />
Warm coat, warm pockets<br />
Fingers explore the corners --<br />
Something! (Memories...) "Hi, Cu," each morning.
Not…tag:teebeedee.ning.com,2010-04-12:1991841:Comment:9209632010-04-12T01:59:51.209Zd's girlhttps://teebeedee.ning.com/profile/Taylor565
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<br />
"Hi, Cu," each morning.<br />
Not a poem, nor Japanese.<br />
She's a lovely dog.
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<br />
"Hi, Cu," each morning.<br />
Not a poem, nor Japanese.<br />
She's a lovely dog.