As you will see, this is a place to express yourself without much restriction. If you're a haiku purist, I'm afraid we transgress almost all the guidelines. But we certainly do enjoy ourselves!
So jump on in and get those creative juices flowing in 5/7/5!
Thank you for the warm welcome, Metub4 and Angharad. I do appreciate it! Poetry can be such an emotional release when needed. I am grateful for this group.
If you post in one of the discussions, your haiku won't eventually disappear from the front page, and we can write and comment directly to it. Be sure to click on "view all" because there are MANY more discussions than show on this page. And, if you don't see one you like, please start a new one. That would be exciting!
Jump right in and have fun. There are a gazillion discussion topics as prompts (be sure to click "view all"), and if you don't see a discussion you like, start a new one!
exotic turkey... I look forward to reading istanbul haiku
Thank you, mutb4 for the welcome, 2 days ago, my wife & I came back home to Istanbul, after six weeks of long visit to India, such great country full of culture and history, diffrent places and colorful people with many many believes, such warm sunny there , wow Goa, and Cochin 30-35C.
It's too good to be overlooked. Next time you post (and PLEASE post more), would you click on "view all" and find (or create) a discussion that fits and post it there? (Like, the discussion "Summer" would have been good for this one.) Haiku posted on the comment wall are easy to overlook and eventually scroll away to oblivion.
I just haven't taken the time yet to go thru all the discussions
I really find it odd and ironic that I am writing in the genre of poetry. Reading poetry usually leaves me frustrated and feeling "why don't they just come out and say what they mean" Any effort to write it comes out like a science treatise set to rhyme and metre. And I'm cranky that the form prevents me from saying what I mean in a direct fashion. I really think it's a sign of mild Asbergers.
However Haikus may be different. The form seems to force a simple directness with a sensory experience. Just what I am trying to achieve with mindfulness.
I TOTALLY agree, PTB! That's exactly why we broke all the rules here, except the most basic (Western) requirement of 5/7/5. It's also why I created what I call the "serial" haiku, which is a series of related haiku which allow you to tell a fuller story.
Haiku does force you to distill a thought/feeling. It's direct, quick, spontaneous, and allows one to "get it out" without belaboring the product. It really made writing poetry accessible to a lot of folks here who otherwise wouldn't have been interested--or so many said.
Although I and Metub4 have essentially been alone here since the exodus away from TBD, if you look at the first pages of any discussion, you'll see work from many members. It was really fun and lively.
And, sorry, but I've been using the haiku group in these "empty" years as a way to work out a huge loss in my life--so, if you read any of my more recent haiku, you'll see mostly depressing themes from me. Before then, I wrote a lot of odes to my love, who was really the focus of any social media page I had anyway.
Anyway, please write on, and use this place to express anything you wish.
I knew a young girl In the Land of Memory. Lost in precious time, ~ And the swirls of mist. Mountains of Experience, Ranges have been built. ~ I sleep in valleys. I exult with the sunrise From the tops of Peaks. ~ High above the Land, Stretched out behind me, so far, Love fades into Time. ~ The young girl stands there, Not quite obscured by the fog. Forever Lovely.
Angharad
Aug 26, 2011
Daddieo
future to be determined
let it come I say
I hope all are safe and secure this eventful day on the Eastern shores and in New England. Be well. Be safe.
Aug 28, 2011
Scott Williamson
iWill
Pick up the pieces
When things fall apart
And puzzle out
A prettier picture.
iAm
Succeed(ing) still despite
When rocks are thrown
And hit their mark
A bruised brilliance.
iShould
Throw caution to the wind
When faced with a choice
And aim at transcendence
A lunar legacy.
iMight
Discover greater reflect
When faced with obstacles
And still to persevere
A sparkling struggle.
iMust
Play games with fate
When kicked with doubt
And start to ascertain
A willing wonder.
iWill
Draw inspiration
When faced with blocks
And carry on
A daring dream.
iCan
Because you did.
Written By: jayarrarr.writes@gmail.com
— — —
Update: Hear here.
Oct 6, 2011
Quinn
I saw this on the internet today :-))
Oct 24, 2011
Daddieo
prromises untold, and more
only, you must fall
Nov 25, 2011
metub4
welcome to BB
a new member to haiku
write on new sister
Dec 9, 2011
Angharad
Hi BB! Thanks for joining us.
As you will see, this is a place to express yourself without much restriction. If you're a haiku purist, I'm afraid we transgress almost all the guidelines. But we certainly do enjoy ourselves!
So jump on in and get those creative juices flowing in 5/7/5!
i apologize
noble tradition altered...
bastardized haiku
Dec 9, 2011
Angharad
HAHAHAHAH!!!
NOPE...nothing at all. I was lying.
Dec 10, 2011
Daddieo
yes lonely in here
stalwart strong but now gone on
nothing ever lasts
Apr 28, 2012
Daddieo
I do
Apr 28, 2012
Angharad
not dead quite yet, D.
wind gutters the flame at times
but embers still burn
Apr 28, 2012
Daddieo
I, for one, am very grateful to hear that...allows me to hold on to beliefs I find essential. Thanks, A. I hope you are well...and loved.
Apr 28, 2012
Risha Namaste
I longed for summer
the breezy maestro of heat
the cool of the nights
Jun 11, 2012
Angharad
Greetings, Risha!
summer invades me
rose sweet mysteries blossom
in warm fertile soil
Jun 16, 2012
Angharad
Welcome back, Bruton! I'm thrilled to see your wonderful words.
Jan 2, 2013
Scott Williamson
rain soft on windshield
travel weary but grateful
for returning home
Mar 19, 2013
metub4
has been awhile Scott
nice that your musings return
write on brother
Mar 19, 2013
Angharad
wonderful saykath
thank you for joining us here
enriching our world
Mar 19, 2013
Angharad
hey beatnik baby
long time no see your bongos
so glad that you're back
Mar 19, 2013
Angharad
Oh! I hope Sophie is doing better now, SayKath!
If you want to write haiku about Sophie, and other pets, that are easily accessible, there's a discussion called "Animal Companions."
I just wrote a quick haiku in it so that it would come to the front page...
Mar 19, 2013
Angharad
:>), SK!
I'm such a glutton for everybody's haiku! I hate it when they disappear from the comment wall so quickly.
Mar 24, 2013
metub4
the richest person =
not one who has most, needs least
life is like coffee
http://www.flickspire.com/_videos/flash/LILC/LILC.swf
Apr 28, 2013
metub4
well for sure SayKath
links are in public domain
what I write's for all
Apr 29, 2013
Scott Williamson
Love is a snowmobile...
racing across the tundra and then suddenly it flips over, pinning you underneath.
At night, the ice weasels come.
Feb 14, 2014
Angharad
SCOTT!
Happy to see you--at least, whatever's left after the ice weasels... <3
Feb 17, 2014
BellaG
Their stormy drama.
Swirling monsoons scream at me.
Retreat to shelter.
Jan 12, 2015
metub4
hello BellaG
nice to see your posting here
hope there's more to come
Jan 12, 2015
Angharad
Welcome, BellaG! As metub4 said, it's wonderful to see you here!
evocative words
creating sharp images...
please keep it coming!
Jan 13, 2015
metub4
hi Doga Seven
welcome to our haiku group
write on my brother
Jan 16, 2015
BellaG
Jan 16, 2015
BellaG
That flies above the stormy
Selfish rants. Deep sigh.
Jan 16, 2015
BellaG
Is frightful. Dream of blue skies.
El Niño go away!
Jan 16, 2015
metub4
grateful for new blood
our lifelines become stronger
more the merrier
Jan 16, 2015
metub4
Greetings BellaG. check out some of the discussions above............
Jan 16, 2015
Angharad
I agree, BellaG!
If you post in one of the discussions, your haiku won't eventually disappear from the front page, and we can write and comment directly to it. Be sure to click on "view all" because there are MANY more discussions than show on this page. And, if you don't see one you like, please start a new one. That would be exciting!
XOXOXOXOXOX
Jan 16, 2015
Angharad
Welcome Doga Seven48!
Jump right in and have fun. There are a gazillion discussion topics as prompts (be sure to click "view all"), and if you don't see a discussion you like, start a new one!
exotic turkey...
I look forward to reading
istanbul haiku
Jan 16, 2015
Doga Seven48
Thank you, mutb4 for the welcome, 2 days ago, my wife & I came back home to Istanbul, after six weeks of long visit to India, such great country full of culture and history, diffrent places and colorful people with many many believes, such warm sunny there , wow Goa, and Cochin 30-35C.
Now it is cold and snowing, below zero celsius.
Jan 17, 2015
Doga Seven48
Thank you Angharad for the welcome.
Jan 17, 2015
metub4
Martin Luther King
champion of civil rights
equal one and all
Jan 18, 2016
metub4
That is 3.14.16 (3.1459 rounded)
numbers are fun too !
Mar 14, 2016
PartTimeBrewer
Dawn creeping thru oaks
Cardinals courting their mates
Oh look a squirrel
Aug 18, 2018
Angharad
Ah, PTB! I didn't see you here.
Thank you for your evocative haiku!
It's too good to be overlooked. Next time you post (and PLEASE post more), would you click on "view all" and find (or create) a discussion that fits and post it there? (Like, the discussion "Summer" would have been good for this one.) Haiku posted on the comment wall are easy to overlook and eventually scroll away to oblivion.
Aug 18, 2018
PartTimeBrewer
I just haven't taken the time yet to go thru all the discussions
I really find it odd and ironic that I am writing in the genre of poetry. Reading poetry usually leaves me frustrated and feeling "why don't they just come out and say what they mean" Any effort to write it comes out like a science treatise set to rhyme and metre. And I'm cranky that the form prevents me from saying what I mean in a direct fashion. I really think it's a sign of mild Asbergers.
However Haikus may be different. The form seems to force a simple directness with a sensory experience. Just what I am trying to achieve with mindfulness.
Aug 18, 2018
Angharad
I TOTALLY agree, PTB! That's exactly why we broke all the rules here, except the most basic (Western) requirement of 5/7/5. It's also why I created what I call the "serial" haiku, which is a series of related haiku which allow you to tell a fuller story.
Haiku does force you to distill a thought/feeling. It's direct, quick, spontaneous, and allows one to "get it out" without belaboring the product. It really made writing poetry accessible to a lot of folks here who otherwise wouldn't have been interested--or so many said.
Although I and Metub4 have essentially been alone here since the exodus away from TBD, if you look at the first pages of any discussion, you'll see work from many members. It was really fun and lively.
And, sorry, but I've been using the haiku group in these "empty" years as a way to work out a huge loss in my life--so, if you read any of my more recent haiku, you'll see mostly depressing themes from me. Before then, I wrote a lot of odes to my love, who was really the focus of any social media page I had anyway.
Anyway, please write on, and use this place to express anything you wish.
Aug 18, 2018
metub4
greetings PTB
great to have you with us here
enjoy and write on
Aug 18, 2018
Angharad
Welcome, Lip Service!
fresh blood to savor
dip your pen in and feed us--
LS runs screaming
HAHAHA! Couldn't help myself. Halloween is coming...
Aug 20, 2018
Steven Willy Rachlin
MIND GIRL - Haiku
I knew a young girl
In the Land of Memory.
Lost in precious time,
~
And the swirls of mist.
Mountains of Experience,
Ranges have been built.
~
I sleep in valleys.
I exult with the sunrise
From the tops of Peaks.
~
High above the Land,
Stretched out behind me, so far,
Love fades into Time.
~
The young girl stands there,
Not quite obscured by the fog.
Forever Lovely.
Oct 30, 2018
Angharad
That's wonderful and evocative, Steven--glad to see you back! As we get older, those lost in the "Land of Memory" become more numerous, don't they?
the sun at your back
your silhouette beckons me
i can't see your face
Oct 30, 2018
PartTimeBrewer
"A haiku is the expression of a temporary enlightenment in which we see into the life of things." ~ R. H. Blyth
Oct 3, 2019
Daddieo
Here is today's news
In the form of a haiku
The ship is still stuck
Mar 27, 2021