Tags: counterpoint to joy, haiku, life's trials, ouch!, poetry, senryu
all the pieces fit
forming a perfect portrait
of heartrending truth
unbeknown to him
a battle was waged and lost
outside his high walls
behind them he waits
convinced they still keep him safe...
but not from himself
the voices cajole
push love away it's a threat...
two souls pay the price
the mind comprehends
the heart can never do so
how could this be true?
heartfelt vows of love
of being one forever
gone like a mirage
now nothing remains
where two hearts beat together
but one heart bleeding
eviscerated
why would you do this to me
i don't deserve it
crushing to be so
utterly dispensable...
nothing worth saving
we all need some hope
justly rewarded our due
peace for one and all
pain is in my soul
at times its overwhelming
I will work past it
I saw a baseball
getting larger and larger
and then it hit me
Glad to see you again, M. For reasons beyond TBD, I'd begun to feel invisible.
Is your haiku literal or figurative? Either way, it doesn't sound good. :>) Care to elaborate or are you just being poetic?
what hurts you hurts me
a condition of friendship...
can i help at all?
I have been told my humor sometimes is painful............
what's ET short for ?
he's only got little legs -
warped sense of humor
or
have you heard about
those new corduroy pillows ?
they're making headlines
one two sucker punch
i'm down and out for the count...
still it's not enough
kick me when i'm down
stab me in the heart and twist
stamp hard on my face
leave me here to die
then worse than any torture
feel nothing at all
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