TBD on Ning
Serial Haiku
It might be fun and interesting to do a variation on Rishi's "Une Lingne Donne" discussion in which three participants will each write a full haiku (rather than a single line) that will end up telling a cohesive haiku "story."
The first person will write a haiku. The second person will hit "reply" to that haiku, copy and paste it in the reply box, then add his or her own haiku. The third person will hit "reply" to the second offering, copy and paste the first two haiku, then add the third and final haiku.
Three haiku for each completed "story" sounds good to me because it gives the opportunity for a beginning, middle, and end.
I'll begin...
Tags: collaboration, poetry
Views: 327
Replies to This Discussion
-
Permalink Reply by Angharad on
-
between the pages
their life played in black on white
emotions in prose
-
-
Permalink Reply by Scott Williamson on
-
subtle poetry
wrings love from sweet words, shared by
a few reaching souls...
-
-
-
between the pages
their life played in black on white
emotions in prose
subtle poetry
wrings love from sweet words, shared by
a few reaching souls...
words mark their passage
when the words are gone, there'll be
nothing left but love
-
-
-
pink cherry blossoms
floating to earth, rosy rain...
is one bloom perfect?
-
-
Permalink Reply by metub4 on
-
pink cherry blossoms
floating to earth, rosy rain...
is one bloom perfect?
compared to your face
there is nothing to equal
your radiance beams
-
-
-
pink cherry blossoms
floating to earth, rosy rain...
is one bloom perfect?
compared to your face
there is nothing to equal...
your radiance beams
perhaps like blossoms
all things have unique beauty
perfect, every one
-
-
-
darkness descended
flames guttered and flickered out
hope shone in his eyes
-
-
-
darkness descended
flames guttered and flickered out
hope shone in his eyes
"beyond dark endings
beginnings wait in sunlight..."
he whispered that truth
-
© 2024 Created by Aggie.
Powered by
