TBD on Ning
Serial Haiku
It might be fun and interesting to do a variation on Rishi's "Une Lingne Donne" discussion in which three participants will each write a full haiku (rather than a single line) that will end up telling a cohesive haiku "story."
The first person will write a haiku. The second person will hit "reply" to that haiku, copy and paste it in the reply box, then add his or her own haiku. The third person will hit "reply" to the second offering, copy and paste the first two haiku, then add the third and final haiku.
Three haiku for each completed "story" sounds good to me because it gives the opportunity for a beginning, middle, and end.
I'll begin...
Tags: collaboration, poetry
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Permalink Reply by Angharad on
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slate blue is her gray
chirping or stalking her prey
paws moving in dreams
behind her eyelids
worlds within worlds unfolding
unseen by humans
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To you as well, Dear Kooner, and kisses to the princess!
I'm sure, like my cats, she hates the fireworks. But, "cleaning" the strawberry shortcake dish always brings them out from hiding...hahahaha.
XOXOXOXOXOXOX
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moonlight silvered curls
eyes fierce with love pierce the night
a loon's haunting call
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Permalink Reply by metub4 on
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moonlight silvered curls
eyes fierce with love pierce the night
a loon's haunting call
bullfrogs serenade
her voluptuous body
I rise to meet her
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moonlight silvered curls
eyes fierce with love pierce the night
a loon's haunting call
bullfrogs serenade
her voluptuous body
I rise to meet her
darkness enshrouds us
hearts beating in counterpoint
we join life's chorus
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energy crackling
tornadoes of orange and gold
dance about your feet
distant eyes sparkling
hiding behind dark curtains
hair at attention
poised for fulfillment
we begin our dance of life
oh how she moves me
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a long winding road
shaded by magestic oaks
often less traveled
a brightly lit path
well trodden and familiar...
he ponders the choice
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a long winding road
shaded by magestic oaks
often less traveled
a brightly lit path
well trodden and familiar...
he ponders the choice
today less traveled
new adventures lie ahead
brighten up my day
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