Personification "Prose" Poem - TBD2024-03-29T00:25:03Zhttp://teebeedee.ning.com/forum/topics/personification-prose-poem?groupUrl=playofwords&commentId=1991841%3AComment%3A558860&groupId=1991841%3AGroup%3A14328&feed=yes&xn_auth=noI wanted to add "secure" to t…tag:teebeedee.ning.com,2009-11-08:1991841:Comment:5596392009-11-08T04:56:43.244ZAppositehttp://teebeedee.ning.com/profile/Apposite
I wanted to add "secure" to the list but it didn't pass the muster test. I remember telling my wife that most beautiful women didn't need to be told they were beautiful because they already knew it. Interestingly enough she said "No, - beautiful women especially need to hear it because they are so prone be insecure given today's marketing and the emphasis placed on youth" I guess there's nothing new in that but for me personally, true beauty sustains over time regardless changes in life stages.…
I wanted to add "secure" to the list but it didn't pass the muster test. I remember telling my wife that most beautiful women didn't need to be told they were beautiful because they already knew it. Interestingly enough she said "No, - beautiful women especially need to hear it because they are so prone be insecure given today's marketing and the emphasis placed on youth" I guess there's nothing new in that but for me personally, true beauty sustains over time regardless changes in life stages. The word "sustain" seemed more enduring and seemed fitting for having the last word in the order placement.<br />
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I have always been fascinated by beauty, not so much because it is often defined as sex appeal, but for me, true beauty often comes out regardless of physical looks. That is such a powerful form of beauty, hence my use of "subtle". nice adjectives....especially…tag:teebeedee.ning.com,2009-11-08:1991841:Comment:5595062009-11-08T04:04:39.853ZMaricel Evascohttp://teebeedee.ning.com/profile/MaricelEvasco
nice adjectives....especially the last one...."sustaining"-- care to elaborate?
nice adjectives....especially the last one...."sustaining"-- care to elaborate? Beauty
Beauty is Sensuous
Be…tag:teebeedee.ning.com,2009-11-08:1991841:Comment:5594652009-11-08T03:43:42.469ZAppositehttp://teebeedee.ning.com/profile/Apposite
<b>Beauty</b><br />
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Beauty is Sensuous<br />
Beauty is Serendipitous<br />
Beauty is Sexy<br />
Beauty is Simple<br />
Beauty is Stately<br />
Beauty is Subtle<br />
Beauty is Supreme<br />
Beauty is Sustaining
<b>Beauty</b><br />
<br />
Beauty is Sensuous<br />
Beauty is Serendipitous<br />
Beauty is Sexy<br />
Beauty is Simple<br />
Beauty is Stately<br />
Beauty is Subtle<br />
Beauty is Supreme<br />
Beauty is Sustaining Maricel I love your writing c…tag:teebeedee.ning.com,2009-11-07:1991841:Comment:5588602009-11-07T23:11:25.116ZLily Rothhttp://teebeedee.ning.com/profile/LilyRoth
Maricel I love your writing challenges. You inspire me to write. You make writing so much fun for me....More More More my little muse!....lol
Maricel I love your writing challenges. You inspire me to write. You make writing so much fun for me....More More More my little muse!....lol (sigh) Lily, you write so bea…tag:teebeedee.ning.com,2009-11-07:1991841:Comment:5571552009-11-07T12:03:15.879ZMaricel Evascohttp://teebeedee.ning.com/profile/MaricelEvasco
(sigh) Lily, you write so beautifully. I really think you ought to write for publication. Have you never tried?<br />
I love your prose poem on patience especially the last line.<br />
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Buy or borrow the <u>The Book of Qualities</u>, by Ruth Gendler (1988). I have a copy at home which I enjoyed reading several times over. I also borrowed her idea of personification prose poem for my lesson in class especially when I am teaching figures of speech. I require my students to add at least 3 to 5 figures of…
(sigh) Lily, you write so beautifully. I really think you ought to write for publication. Have you never tried?<br />
I love your prose poem on patience especially the last line.<br />
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Buy or borrow the <u>The Book of Qualities</u>, by Ruth Gendler (1988). I have a copy at home which I enjoyed reading several times over. I also borrowed her idea of personification prose poem for my lesson in class especially when I am teaching figures of speech. I require my students to add at least 3 to 5 figures of speech when writing their poem.<br />
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alliteration, assonance, metaphor, simile, oxymoron, hyperbole, onomatopoeia,</i> etc. Patience wears a coat with m…tag:teebeedee.ning.com,2009-11-07:1991841:Comment:5568372009-11-07T06:13:20.013ZLily Rothhttp://teebeedee.ning.com/profile/LilyRoth
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Patience wears a coat with many pockets,each one filled with a pleasant memory to pass the time away.Around her wrist she wears a broken watch,she has no need to count the minutes in a day,she counts her blessings instead.She always carries a bright red umbrella at her side, even though she knows, eventually this storm too, shall pass.She likes to write secrets in the sand, when the ocean washes away her words, she can write new ones. Christmas is her…
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Patience wears a coat with many pockets,each one filled with a pleasant memory to pass the time away.Around her wrist she wears a broken watch,she has no need to count the minutes in a day,she counts her blessings instead.She always carries a bright red umbrella at her side, even though she knows, eventually this storm too, shall pass.She likes to write secrets in the sand, when the ocean washes away her words, she can write new ones. Christmas is her favorite holiday,when she tries to guess what is inside every gift, before she tears off the pretty wrappings.Patience hears music in the wind and sees animals in the clouds and she has given every sparkling star in the night time sky a name. And Patience will always wait for love,no matter how late it finally shows up.....