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Ready for a new one? May we try something different? I have been tripping of late through my old tunes and find many memories stirred through the process. They are coming out in my haikus. Loose rules here except for the 5-7-5 standard. Write a haiku about your favorite tune, capture favorite lines from your song, write about your favorite songwriter or however you choose to do it. You can tell what the song is if you like or have your friends guess. Let's have some fun here and bring back some of our favorite tunes. Might be a way of honoring our "heroes" of younger years. Below are a couple of haikus from our prior discussions as examples:

I talk to the wind
time to say goodbye my dear
the wind does not hear

(by Scott Williamson in 'Goodbye and Wind')

OR -

c'mon and touch me
can't you see I'm not afraid
c'mon touch me babe

Tags: haiku, lyrics, memories, song

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fifth day of Christmas
my true love did send to me
five golden ear rings
(four calling song birds)
(three cacklin French hens)
(these two turtle doves)
(partridge in pear tree)
sixth day of Christmas
my true love did send to me
six geese a-laying
(five golden ear rings)
(four calling song birds)
(three cacklin French hens)
(these two turtle doves)
(partridge in pear tree)
seventh Christmas day
my true love did send to me
Seven swans a-swimming
(six geese a-laying)
(five golden ear rings)
(four calling song birds)
(three cacklin French hens)
(these two turtle doves)
(partridge in pear tree)
eighth day of Christmas
my true love did send to me
Eight maids a-milking
(Seven swans a-swimming)
(six geese a-laying)
(five golden ear rings)
(four calling song birds)
(three cacklin French hens)
(these two turtle doves)
(partridge in pear tree)
ninth day of Christmas
my true love did send to me
Nine ladies dancing
(Eight maids a-milking)
(Seven swans a-swimming)
(six geese a-laying)
(five golden ear rings)
(four calling song birds)
(three cacklin French hens)
(these two turtle doves)
(partridge in pear tree)
and in the end, the
love you take is equal to
the love you make

It's missing a syllable, but I didn't want to tamper with perfection....

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Gw15E52qDJU
a beauty.....

and in the end, the
love you take is equal to
the love you make ahhhhh.....
you make me dizzy
Miss Lizzy, way you rock n roll
when we do the stroll

Come on Miss Lizzy
love me before grow too old
you make me dizzy
How sweet it is........
favorite old one
I'm dreaming of white Christmas
but then not too white
Attachments:
love lost, such a cost
give me things that don't get lost
rolling home to you

old man take a look
at my life I'm alot like you
need one to love me

the whole day through,ah
one look in my eyes and you
can tell that is true

I've been first and last
look at how the times goes past
all alone at last

old man look at my life
I am a lot like you were
rolling home to you

http://www.lyrics.com/old-man-lyrics-neil-young.html
Unforgettable
Lullaby for your baby
I remember you

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